Saturday, April 11, 2015

Day 11 - the beautiful death

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the beautiful death

which way?
I ask the crow
scanning his piercing eyes
towards pastel western skies
and as he goes
I go
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This form is called Badger's Hexastitch, which is like a cinquain with two more syllables added. I like the way it looks in print. I may try stringing together a group of these stanzas into a larger poem before NaPoWriMo is over. But for now, it will have to work as a pseudo-zen death poem.




1 comment:

  1. you know
    a zen death poem
    is a new one for me
    walking towards the sky
    nah prefer surf
    myself :)

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