Redemption of a Partially-Reformed Super Villain
Written for dVerse: MeetingTheBar: Pleiades. This is a fun form. I'm glad I tried it. Go here to read other dVerse poets' Pleiades form.
Looting her aurora - a stunning line - I like how you worked with the metaphors here.
love smears judgement is cool
looting her aurora / left her tied in ribbons...lovelace indeed...
Cool video too. Bit of naughtiness in this metaphor.Looting her aurora, leaving her tied in ribbons *chuckles* but then again it could just be my wicked mind. As always delightful, clever and imaginative work.
Aurora, a marvel of nature and magical one too!
Such a clever use of the metaphor to describe what I imagine have been an intoxicating and love-laced experience ~ Love it Barry ~
heh your heavenly bodies under the heavenly bodies...nice creative slip in of lovelace as well....sounds like it could be fun...smiles.
I have always wanted to see the Northern Lights - nice
i was between nature and relationship... the power of the pen... always something more to a piece than meets the eye
I bit of a riddle, somewhat provocative....nice.
Magical and sensual.
Groovy piece. Love the last line.