Sunday, April 20, 2014

Requiem for an Obsolete Laptop PC

Requiem for an Obsolete Laptop PC

Old, rusted sword
Once sharp, sleek, brutally effective
Now ponderous, brittle

Dipped into sorcery
We’ve transgressed in carnal indulgences
Shortening your lifecycle

Slow to strike
Technology quickly overtakes us both
Rendering us edgeless

Sharpened your blade
Slew dragons, impaled challengers until
No edge remains

You have my gratitude
But replacement with greater processor
Comes from Amazon

NaPoWriMo Day 20 – Collum Lune – because it was either this, or string together a series of curse words aimed at my PC.


  1. Lunes are so reliable. Maybe even more so than our most beloved laptops.

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